Setting the scene for narrative writing. Using adjectives to paint pictures with words There were smelly skins hanging on the wall, covering gaps in the stone where the wind whistled in. There were wooden cages piled in one corner and filled with small living animals squirrels and stoats lizards and toads and one tiny monkey with a wizened face like a sad old man's.There were shelves of bottles, bowls, and carved boxes, dried plants and stuffed animals. Magic hung in the air like a mist.
personal recount In the weekend I went to my cousins house. Frst I played dress ups and I was a cow boy. Next we ate cake and chocolate , Then I wanted to rest but my big cousin Nora did not want me to rest because she want to play more games with me . After that we played hide an seek. Next we played with my dad we had to hit him , Then we went to my cousins room and we all had to hide then wait. Finally my mum came to see the room and we scared her. not long after that we went home.
How to enter a marae. ( writing explanations)
Here are the instructions for walking onto a marae, if you need to know.
First you have to take off your shoes when you enter. Next the speaker does a speech called a mihi and they sing a waiata and then the visitors do the same. A koha or gift offering is put down on the floor between the two groups.Then we do a hongi together and then sit down again and go to the dining room where we have some food. After that we do some activities where we can we touch some carving but not touch the flax . Next we do some more activities. They are patterns of our family . Finally we will need to go back home. I enjoyed going to the marae and I hope I come back.
what creature I would be.
I would like to be a lion because they are strong, brave and smart. Lions teeth are sharp as a razor, if I patted a lion it would be angry as a bull. Lions are smart at hunting and attacking, lions hunt deer, zebras and wild pigs If i took a lion home it will break glass and doors.Then it would eat me and my family.A lion is yellow huge and has a long tail. My opinion is that I would never have a lion in my house forever.
Setting the scene for narrative writing. Using adjectives to paint pictures with words
There were smelly skins hanging on the wall, covering gaps in the stone where the wind whistled in. There were wooden cages piled in one corner and filled with small living animals squirrels and stoats lizards and toads and one tiny monkey with a wizened face like a sad old man's.There were shelves of bottles, bowls, and carved boxes, dried plants and stuffed animals. Magic hung in the air like a mist.
personal recount
In the weekend I went to my cousins house. Frst I played dress ups and I was a cow boy. Next we ate cake and chocolate , Then I wanted to rest but my big cousin Nora did not want me to rest because she want to play more games with me . After that we played hide an seek. Next we played with my dad we had to hit him , Then we went to my cousins room and we all had to hide then wait. Finally my mum came to see the room and we scared her. not long after that we went home.
How to enter a marae. ( writing explanations)
Here are the instructions for walking onto a marae, if you need to know.
First you have to take off your shoes when you enter. Next the speaker does a speech called a mihi and they sing a waiata and then the visitors do the same. A koha or gift offering is put down on the floor between the two groups.Then we do a hongi together and then sit down again and go to the dining room where we have some food. After that we do some activities where we can we touch some carving but not touch the flax . Next we do some more activities. They are patterns of our family . Finally we will need to go back home. I enjoyed going to the marae and I hope I come back.
what creature I would be.
I would like to be a lion because they are strong, brave and smart. Lions teeth are sharp as a razor, if I patted a lion it would be angry as a bull. Lions are smart at hunting and attacking, lions hunt deer, zebras and wild pigs If i took a lion home it will break glass and doors.Then it would eat me and my family.A lion is yellow huge and has a long tail. My opinion is that I would never have a lion in my house forever.
Fear
fear is white
Tastes like cold ice cream
Smells like black jellybeans
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It looks like a dark station
Sounds like people coming closer
It feels like a frighted rabbit hiding its den.